This is based on my morning, except that I'm not as attractive as she is; and I'm not gay.
I couldn't decide if I wanted this to be longer or not. I also had a lot of endings in mind, including comically waking up the other woman.
I don't know. I'm not sure if this is done, and I'm not sure how good it actually is. I like a lot of the sentences, but I'm not sure about the paragraphs.
I almost went back to give her more definition, as race or eye color or something like that; but I definitely do like it better this way.
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